Just finished all endings. Very unique look and feel to the game. The art is gorgeous! I like the mystical, mythical tone. One minor complaint that completely took me out of the story was the word 'Dad'. I really recommend using 'Father' instead. 'Dad' sounds way too modern, and in fact I almost laughed when I read it. I also recommend one more proofread, as I noticed spelling and punctuation issues. Otherwise, very interesting concept, and yeah, that art...<3. Thank you!
Oh, proofreading... That is quite a valid point you made, as I rushed to publish it before the school deadline. I truly appreciate you pointing that out; it shows you paid close attention to the plot. I will keep you updated once I've fixed the script.
For those of us who can't read, lol, could you switch the icons for the downloads? You've got the Windows/Linux icons next to the mac.zip and vice versa. I looked at the icons and downloaded mac.zip by mistake. :P :D
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Just finished all endings. Very unique look and feel to the game. The art is gorgeous! I like the mystical, mythical tone. One minor complaint that completely took me out of the story was the word 'Dad'. I really recommend using 'Father' instead. 'Dad' sounds way too modern, and in fact I almost laughed when I read it. I also recommend one more proofread, as I noticed spelling and punctuation issues. Otherwise, very interesting concept, and yeah, that art...<3. Thank you!
Oh, proofreading... That is quite a valid point you made, as I rushed to publish it before the school deadline. I truly appreciate you pointing that out; it shows you paid close attention to the plot. I will keep you updated once I've fixed the script.
Thanks for all your comments!
For those of us who can't read, lol, could you switch the icons for the downloads? You've got the Windows/Linux icons next to the mac.zip and vice versa. I looked at the icons and downloaded mac.zip by mistake. :P :D
Apologies for the late reply :P I have fixed that icon! Thanks for letting me know!